Wednesday, March 28, 2012

English blog week of 3/23

This week I have worked on and finished my rough drafts for my pieces of rhetoric. One piece was an email to parents that told them about the importance of health and their kids. It is extremely important for parents to be invested in their childs health since all of the childs habits and behaviors will more than likely form from the parents. In my second piece of rhetoric I designed a poster that could be used to encourage kids to choose to be active rather than sitting inside playing video games. The poster uses two pictures of fat kids playing video games, and fit kids playing basketball having fun to show kids its more enjoyable and healthy to get out and play.

1 comment:

  1. Your pieces of rhetoric are very good. I would just keep in mind who your main target audience is and make sure your rhetoric appeals to them in the best way possible. If you want to peruade more kids remeber to use a lot of pictures and bright colors with very few words. Your email to parents seems like a really good ideal and i hope it makes them more aware as well.

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